2022年7月7日雅思大作文范文：好的教育比个人能力更重要

2022年7月7日考试已经结束啦，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2：好的教育比个人能力更重要相关范文，供雅思考生参考。

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Good teaching is more important for academic success than individual ability.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

教育类

【题目解析】

题目大意：对于取得好成绩来说，好的教学比学生的个人能力更重要。

这个题目属于“观点类题型”，要求考生明确表达个人观点。本文作者所持观点为“完全不赞同”，故主体两个段落分别写一个理由对观点进行支持。

当然，考生还可以选择“完全同意”、“部分同意”或“部分不同意”这样的观点。

【写作思路】

Para 1 = 题目改写 + 个人观点（完全不同意）

Para 2 = 理由1

Para 3 = 理由22

Para 4 = 重申观点 + 总结主体2个段中的理由

【参考范文】

There are those who opine that being academically successful depends mainly on teachers’ excellent instruction rather than learners’ personal capabilities. Personally, I totally disagree with the statement because students with a lower ability cannot achieve high marks in assessments and exams despite the provision of good teaching; meanwhile, academic success also relies on learners’ other attributes.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that students with low literacy and numeracy skills may find it difficult to gain remarkable academic results even if they are taught by sound teaching. For example, in professionally designed English literature lessons, some students may still be unlikely to annotate and analyse a poem after the teacher has utilised scaffolding to demonstrate approaches and presented examples. Similarly, mathematics teachers who give highly logical and structured lectures cannot help students to solve questions due to their inability to comprehend concepts and do calculations.

Another important point I consider relevant is that there is more to students’ success in learning than good teaching; in fact, many other individual abilities matter. To achieve high-level academic success, students are required to do extensive research. For instance, business students need to deeply explore information from multifarious resources about what motivates a country to develop, how its expansion is influencing the world, and what can be drawn upon and applied in the future, which may not be fully covered in class. Also, students’ persistence is decisive because this trait keeps them making progress and helps them to outperform their peers in the end.

In conclusion, I have strong opposition to the view that compared to students’ individual ability, good teaching plays a more significant role in helping them with their academic success. For one thing, no matter how well teachers can deliver their classes, students without learning abilities will eventually fail; for another, students’ abilities, such as research skills and perseverance contribute more to their success in learning.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.academically successful 成绩好

2.depend mainly on 主要取决于

3.instruction (n.) 教学

4.personal capabilities 个人能力

5.students with a lower ability 能力低的学生

6.achieve high marks in assessments and exams 作业和考试中取得好成绩

7.the provision of 提供

8.academic success 成绩好

9.rely on 取决于

10.attribute (n.) 特征